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technicolor. by *SubstituteSadist:iconSubstituteSadist:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Fixed


hey beautiful,
dress up like an
ugly
doll, for all the little girls
who don't know
what inner beauty is.

hey gorgeous,
don't make me
look
at you; you make me
think of better times
and cinnamon rolls
from a dusty kitchen oven.

                                                                               hey red and white,
                                                                               you sold your souls to
                                                                               valentine
                                                                               cards. do you miss when
                                                                               you were real colors?

                                                                               hey black and blue,
                                                                               give me a pretty little
                                                                               bruise
                                                                               to show my friends
                                                                               on the playground.
                                                                               (they're always
                                                                               impressed by violence.)

hey pen and paper,
sorry i don't
write
with you, you make
my fingers ache.
(i guess i'll never be
like those famous lyricists
who write their songs in
scribbled script
that only they can understand.)

hey polaroids,
sorry i don't take my
pictures
with you, it's just
so expensive
nowadays.

                                                                               hey music,
                                                                               could you write your
                                                                               soul
                                                                               inside my brain
                                                                               so i can fashion you
                                                                               new melodies
                                                                               of up and down
                                                                               and in-between?

                                                                               hey love,
                                                                               could you grip my
                                                                               heart
                                                                               a little tighter
                                                                               so i can kiss him
                                                                               without thinking
                                                                               of a thousand different things?


                                            hey life,
                                            shoot yourself through my
                                            veins
                                            a little faster,
                                            it would make things
                                            feel as beautiful
                                            as technicolor.
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Author's Comments

i know, i'm a title GENIUS. 8D
hahahaha

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=Pickled-Poppy Apr 28, 2009, 10:27:51 AM
Now this I love
Like soooo much.
i love like a tonne.
Well done.

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I'll write with more coherence than I'll ever speak
:iconsubstitutesadist:
*SubstituteSadist Apr 28, 2009, 10:29:49 AM
haha, thank you. ^__^

--
"I’m not a writer—I just have an unhealthy obsession with words."
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~Shade909 Apr 28, 2009, 10:31:27 AM
your also a literary genius
i properly love this, style works well with subjects which are in turn put across very well! good writing =]

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~|~ Fantastications of a Fucked Up Mind ~|~

Jakespeare
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*SubstituteSadist Apr 28, 2009, 10:32:40 AM
you're amazing, thank you soo much<3

--
"I’m not a writer—I just have an unhealthy obsession with words."
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~x-x-sakura-x-x Apr 28, 2009, 10:33:07 AM
this is beautiful <33
i love your words <33

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~Shade909 Apr 28, 2009, 10:34:03 AM
your very welcome, this is one of the best pieces ive had the priviledge to read in a long time.

thank you for writing it :)

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~|~ Fantastications of a Fucked Up Mind ~|~

Jakespeare
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*SubstituteSadist Apr 28, 2009, 10:34:56 AM
i love YOUR words<33
(because they make me happy)
hahah!
thank you so much. (:

--
"I’m not a writer—I just have an unhealthy obsession with words."
:iconsubstitutesadist:
*SubstituteSadist Apr 28, 2009, 10:38:10 AM
oh wow! thank you so much for saying that, really, i am undeserving. ^^;

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"I’m not a writer—I just have an unhealthy obsession with words."
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~x-x-sakura-x-x Apr 28, 2009, 10:41:16 AM
aww ^-^ :iconhuggleplz:
no problem at all sweetie <3

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~JuniperBonsai Apr 28, 2009, 11:10:55 AM
I'd turn into a critic who uses a single word to describe something, but somehow that never seems to do your writing the proper justice.

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I fly like paper, get high like planes.
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